Vincent

so...sacared....disturbed...both....*sucks thumb* so, is this...one of those badluck things? *looks around nervously* but nice now, if youll excuse me, i have to run for my live *runs away screaming*

great discription in the story. but its realllyyyyy long. try posting in sections vince

yeah, sorry about the spacing, i totally forgot. that "the soldier" was a mistake, i probably missed it. i made Nunzio seem proud and arrogant at first to give the ...

the most amazing poem ive ever read in my entire live! brilliant! fantastic! great! monafique! picture perfect! keep it up! vince

that poem is amazing! great job! i really enjoyed it. keep up the good work! :D

this is the new and improved version. im still working on the info-dumping, but sorted out those other little things. please tell me if i missed something. thanks for everything! ...

this is going to help more than alot! thanks. ill sen the "updated" version as soon as i can. sorry about all these mistakes, but yeah. lots of thanksses (or ...

thanks for the tips and everything! its going to do wonders for eon! thanks.

Hi Kyte, Thank you for your comment, I do appreciate it, please just take note English is not my first language, I am Afrikaans speaking but have English as second ...

I really enjoyed this and i like the idea and the discription of everything alot! great story!