Victory

"Amber, darling it's to dangerous." .... ought to be "... too dangerous" "Dad stop it, your too protective." .... ought to be "... your're too..." You did not use punctuation ...

I like the continuity your novel has. You are able to carry you reader along and make the story imaginative. That is a skill to recognize and appreciate. I also ...

First, i love the title of this article. Though your examples do not reach out to everyone who might read in practical terms, its still a good attempt. To the ...

Interesting i must say you write up is. I fully agree to the message you are trying to pass on. Indeed, we have to spend quality time to reflect on ...