VictoriaBarton

omg that's adorable

Thank you so much for your feedback. I'm really glad you liked it! Also, I think Mira is a really cool nickname, hadn't even thought of that! (Her real name ...

It's really good that you recognize the problem and are humble enough to understand that it needs fixing. Overall, you're a great writer. Keep it up!

Thanks for your review. And I love the clarification at the end XD

However, even tough sneeze was the only thing I could think of, it also has some significance to me because I have really bad allergies, so even though I love ...

Thank you so much for your review. I enjoyed writing this as well.

Thank you! To be honest (and I know it sounds stupid) but sneeze was the only thing I could think of that rhymed. I definitely need to expand my vocabulary ...

np, thanks so much. In the future, as I explore writing poetry, I'm sure I'll be able to improve.

Thank you so much for your review. I love getting reviews from people who are better at writing than I am. I can learn so much! Thank you and keep ...

Thanks for your feedback!

If you didn't have a specific idea in mind, you did great!

I absolutely loved this. It conveys such great emotion and I was right with the character the entire time. However, you switched between present and past tense and it was ...

*feeling about the ending*

Thank you so much for your review! I agree with what you've said, and will make revisions. I love feedback from other writers and it helps me improve as well. ...

Thank you so much for your review. I agree with every point you've made. Sometimes it's really good to get other people's opinions for things that you might not have ...