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Victinino494

Victinino494

  • Short Story » Humor, Politics Re: The Invasion

    Thanks :)

    Oct 31, 2014
  • Short Story » Humor, Politics Re: The Invasion

    Well what do you want me to do? It wasn't John's fault America invaded when he was walking to work. In case you missed it, it's meant to be a ...

    Oct 29, 2014
  • Short Story » Humor, Politics Re: The Invasion

    Okay thanks for the review, I found this helpful. But to clarify on what I meant in the story, I'll explain the following: - The first sentence is meant to ...

    Oct 28, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Humor Re: Unclean

    Thanks for the feedback :) I will consider making an animated short for it

    Apr 3, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Humor Re: Unclean

    Will do ;)

    Mar 31, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Humor Re: Unclean

    I am currently writing the sequel to this...

    Mar 30, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Humor Re: Unclean

    Haha... I'm glad you appreciate this as I intended it. Thanks heaps. I laughed out loud a few times reading your response to this story so I appreciate that also

    Mar 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Literature, Other Re: Silence is Silver, Chapter 1.

    Wow that is impacting. I can't relate to this, but with this I can start to understand. It sounds like you have some experience with an incidence like this... Sorry ...

    Mar 26, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Humor Re: Unclean

    GRR I wrote a reply to this and it won't show up... Basically, I said that this work doesn't need to make sense, it was just for comic relief... what ...

    Mar 26, 2014
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Technology Re: They Wanted A Perfect Computer

    " I loved the way you ended it, with the computer showing Them the only way It could show emotion: by treating Them the way They treated It. " -Iggy ...

    Mar 26, 2014


According to all known laws of aviation, there is no way a bee should be able to fly. Its wings are too small to get its fat little body off the ground.
— The Bee Movie