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Vermiliondawn

  • Lyrics » Realistic, Lyrical Re: Bendicion

    Thanks my guy, and thanks for spotting that error, i often make a lot of mistakes when i post because i just write and submit. but, much appreciation for stopping ...

    Mar 13, 2018
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: del

    YOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO First let me say God bless you my dude. I loved this 100% You're poem was amazing, I don't know if you intended this, but, I felt such a ...

    Mar 6, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: "Sight"

    First off thank you, many of the critiques and reviews for my work are about grammar, it's always been the most difficult thing to get a hold of in my ...

    Mar 11, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: #94

    Thank you for your critique. But, that's exactly the point. It's not so much rambling. I didn't write this in the explanation, but, for about a year and a half ...

    Mar 10, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: I Watch the Red River Flow

    Well, I can't imagine that much loss. But, I can say, that because you're still alive, their memory lives on. And it lives on through your beautiful writing, and through ...

    Mar 10, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: I Watch the Red River Flow

    I'm so sorry to hear that, the loss of a loved one is never easy. My condolences. I will definitely have to read your other piece. I'm truly sorry if ...

    Mar 10, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: I Watch the Red River Flow

    My phone posted this three times. I'm very sorry

    Mar 10, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: I Watch the Red River Flow

    This is an absolutely beautiful peiece. The emotion and description behind it are absolutely moving. At first I didn't get it, I couldn't understand what the idea of the "Red ...

    Mar 10, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: I Watch the Red River Flow

    This is an absolutely beautiful peiece. The emotion and description behind it are absolutely moving. At first I didn't get it, I couldn't understand what the idea of the "Red ...

    Mar 10, 2017


In short, Mrs. Pontellier was beginning to realize her position in the universe as a human being, and to recognize her relations as an individual to the world within and about her.
— Kate Chopin, The Awakening