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  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: The Girl with The Pale Blue Eyes

    The sorrow from this poem is, in a way, lovely. Not that the poems message itself, about a young girl who lost her joy, is good, or in any way ...

    Mar 6, 2018
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: Please don't.

    This ain't so much of a review, just a thought. I love this piece, i love the raw emotion it has. The writers on this site, i find, are great ...

    Mar 6, 2018
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: raise my tiny fists to shatter open heaven

    Well this was extremely interesting, I found it t hard to follow at first glance, but, when I took the time to try and understand it it became rather extraordinary. ...

    Mar 10, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: I Watch the Red River Flow

    This is an absolutely beautiful peiece. The emotion and description behind it are absolutely moving. At first I didn't get it, I couldn't understand what the idea of the "Red ...

    Mar 10, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: infusion

    Hello Apricity, this is my first review on the sight so I apologize if it's not up to par. I just wanted to say I loved this piece, it spoke ...

    Mar 10, 2017


A non-writing writer is a monster courting insanity.
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