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Re: Crystal Stars First Try. Please skip to REAL first chapter.
Do not let the size of this story frighten you. :oops: Hey, my name’s Nova, though I don’t know where I got it. I was an urchin, living in the ...
Jan 20, 2009 -
Re: Chapter 1 - Harry Who?
Throughout every single sentence I read, the whole story seemed to scream ',FANGIRL!' A girl that meets all the main characters almost instantly, and to make matters worst-It mimics the ...
Jan 7, 2009 -
Re: Runaway : The Journey of thieves {chapter 1}
(Have tolerance! I'm new to reviewing.) [The sound of treading black stallions on the rocky paths chased us everywhere we went. We could never escape the haunting sound; it was ...
Jan 7, 2009 -
Re: Leoni
Actually, I don't think there's much wrong with the story-Its exceptional. The description of the town was quite well done, really brings the whole mood out into the story. Other ...
Jan 7, 2009