Ventomology

We actually have the awkward doors mentioned earlier, but still whoops on all the grammatical errors. And I suppose I should have someone leave during that last scene, hm? Again, ...

Whoops, I probably need something from Theo or Noel's perspective so that it's clear that they already have plans...

Oh... Yeah that thinking bit needs some work. Thanks for catching it!

Whoops! I guess Theo's internet telepathy requires explanation. Just asking, but do you think it would be smart to put it in the previous chapter?

Yeah... I've been having lots of trouble with this one. It's definitely not my best.

Thank you so much! I saw that you already read the other chapters, so I'lll get to those ASAP!

Ooh! I love chemistry too! (Except for naming compounds because that's boring and we spent pretty much an entire semester on it... Ick.) Oh, and thanks for reading this! (it's ...

Well, I'm not forty, it was just me joking around. (Because really, I don't know any other teenagers who listen to public radio) And as for the questions you had ...

Oh, thanks so much for reading this!

Oh... Well I probably should have studied more on the meteor bit... (I tried asking an astrophysicist but...) Anyway, thanks for reading my article! I sort of thought of it ...

Oh um... That bit about the bleeding is explained earlier in the story... Thanks for reviewing though!

Thank you so much! I'll definitely take this speech differentiation thing to a higher level on my next piece. Of course, having characters of different social standings probably helps... Thanks ...

Ooh! Thanks for starting this one! Please do not be afraid to point out any little details you find awkward later (I'm sure there are many.) Thanks again!

Oh, well... Let's see, how do I explain this? So you know how old people talk a little differently than teenagers and twenty-somethings? They use different words, expressions, phrases, and ...

Thanks for reading this! I was worried no one would find it.