Ventomology

Heh, well... The people on the airship aren't all that important to the story so I sort of ignored them. Whoops. Thanks for catching all of that!

Um... I think the whole "crashed airship" is my cliff-hanger... Maybe it just wasn't suspenseful enough? What do you think I would do to make that a bit more dramatic? ...

Thanks for reading! (I only hope I can keep this up...)

Thanks so much for all your reviews and support while I worked on this! There is still a lot for me to do, and after I have my parents and ...

Well, if you remember, the mission was to keep the quantum device from doing anything to disrupt the universe. (I suppose I did a bad job explaining that... I'll probably ...

Oh... Um... Lots of mistakes here, I see! The bit about not killing them is weird depending on how you look at it. I always figured it would be easier ...

We actually have the awkward doors mentioned earlier, but still whoops on all the grammatical errors. And I suppose I should have someone leave during that last scene, hm? Again, ...

Whoops, I probably need something from Theo or Noel's perspective so that it's clear that they already have plans...

Oh... Yeah that thinking bit needs some work. Thanks for catching it!

Whoops! I guess Theo's internet telepathy requires explanation. Just asking, but do you think it would be smart to put it in the previous chapter?

Yeah... I've been having lots of trouble with this one. It's definitely not my best.

Thank you so much! I saw that you already read the other chapters, so I'lll get to those ASAP!

Ooh! I love chemistry too! (Except for naming compounds because that's boring and we spent pretty much an entire semester on it... Ick.) Oh, and thanks for reading this! (it's ...

Well, I'm not forty, it was just me joking around. (Because really, I don't know any other teenagers who listen to public radio) And as for the questions you had ...

Oh, thanks so much for reading this!