Ventomology

Aww, thanks Tort!

By the way, I did not realize what you meant by 'inverted commas' until after posting this review. Excuse my ignorance, please.

Don't worry! You're not a pathetic reviewer at all! (Honestly, you probably get across more than I do. I'm just long-winded.) Also, thanks for the feedback on the bus stuff. ...

Correct. We can start writing chapter two on Monday.

Don't worry. I'll tag them for you. @AstralHunter and @Tortwag, Flash's LMS is over here!

By the way, have you tagged Hunter and Tort so that they know your writing is up?

Wow... it's amazing that the contest's been going on for so long. Power on, Widder!

Hunter, I have submitted the second part! Unfortunately, I am without computer access for the rest of the week, and therefore will not be submitting to the journal. It's fine ...

A little note: I had originally intended for this to be a happy piece. In fact, I would only have to change one sentence to make it so. However, with ...

Goodness... the entire thing? That's impressive. Also, I'm sorry I haven't been reviewing lately! I promise I will review all the chapters I missed once Review Day starts tomorrow.

Oh, I didn't see anything wrong with flashbacks, I just found it intriguing and decided to ask. Sorry if that came off wrong!

All of the previous chapters are listed on the sidebar, if you would like. I'm glad to hear you enjoyed it! Thank you! -Buggie

Aww, thanks Silver! Uh... I hope I wasn't too harsh in reviewing your work? I tend to focus on what could be improved and then forget to say what people ...

Um... I do have a completed work here on YWS (though I am not a published author), but it's from when I first joined and isn't very good. Thank you.

I'll tell him! Granted, I'm gone all next weekend, so you may have to tell Hunter yourself. I'll be waiting for the next chapter!