Ventomology

I'll see about those nitpicks you mentioned, (and I have no idea about titling routes. I'll look it up.) so thank you very much! Also, I am glad you thought ...

The entire story will take place on Rick's bus, yes. (Whether or not he has the same bus for the whole thing, I have no guarantees.) Thanks for the review!

Aww, thank you so much! I'll probably end up following a bunch more lms novels as well, so I'll look for yours!

Name-dumping is generally discouraged, but I understand that it was necessary for this. We all have to do ice-breaking activities at some point.

Oh! I can't believe I missed that bit at the beginning. Thanks so much for catching it and taking the time to review.

You're so fast! I totally wasn't expecting any reviews until the actual review day. Also, all three of your impressions are dead-on, and exactly what I was going for. :)

Aww, thanks Tort!

By the way, I did not realize what you meant by 'inverted commas' until after posting this review. Excuse my ignorance, please.

Don't worry! You're not a pathetic reviewer at all! (Honestly, you probably get across more than I do. I'm just long-winded.) Also, thanks for the feedback on the bus stuff. ...

Correct. We can start writing chapter two on Monday.

Don't worry. I'll tag them for you. @AstralHunter and @Tortwag, Flash's LMS is over here!

By the way, have you tagged Hunter and Tort so that they know your writing is up?

Wow... it's amazing that the contest's been going on for so long. Power on, Widder!

Hunter, I have submitted the second part! Unfortunately, I am without computer access for the rest of the week, and therefore will not be submitting to the journal. It's fine ...

A little note: I had originally intended for this to be a happy piece. In fact, I would only have to change one sentence to make it so. However, with ...