Ventomology

Shoot those are pretty awkward. Thanks for the pointers! I'll get around to fixing them once I have a computer and not a little phone keyboard. And thanks for giving ...

Leave it to me to get my math wrong. The singing thing is explained in an earlier chapter and has to do with how the siren language works--they use notes ...

(OMG It's BlueAfrica cue the shrieking) Hey thanks so much for giving this a shot! I have a bad habit of putting my chapter titles in the description part (because ...

Hey, thanks for reviewing! I'm not sure if I'm going to do any tagging for this piece, since it's a part of the LMS contest, but if you can't find ...

Wheelchair boy is pretty great, yeah. I'm glad you like him! Hopefully I can pull him off without being ableist. Fyi, this story is part of an endurance contest know ...

Thanks so much! I'm glad to know people actually think this is funny.

Hey! Thanks a ton for giving this piece a shot! It's part of a contest known as the LMS (for Last Man Standing), so I have no doubt you'll be ...

Hmm... I always thought of magenta as a shade of pink, like not all pinks are magenta, but all magentas are pink? And you are definitely right about the cheese ...

I think teenagers with cars tend to really like their cars... a number of my classmates actually do the same thing as Vera. It's sad, isn't it? Thanks as always!

I think that thing with Brooke may be the most embarrassing case of discontinuity I have ever written... Thanks for catching it! Also, I guess I will have to explain ...

Thanks for the review! Unfortunately I can't see Martin and Drake speaking in quite the manner you suggest, but you are probably right that the conversation is cliched. I'll have ...

Ahh, you're probably right about that last point. I think I've had the problem a number of times in the past too; it's a hard one to catch! I'll try ...

Thanks!

Honestly, this whole book is cheesy, and I'm just glad to be done with it so I can work on other things. There are definitely things to fix, and I'll ...

Thanks!