Ventomology

This actually is a shorter chapter than what I have been putting out, so that would explain why you felt it was short. But I am glad you enjoyed it! ...

...I think I am going to have to play around with the interlude formatting again... The way this is formatted does lend itself to causing confusion on the time flow. ...

Man...when I edited this I must have been totally out of it. Now that you point it out, this chapter is probably the biggest info dump I've ever written. If ...

Ahh... that is a good point. I'll have to keep all the possible reactions in mind when I come back to this guy. (Also how did I get two of ...

It certainly is later. Sorry I'm still experimenting with how I want to format the little interludes.

I love that moment when someone points out something totally obvious that completely slipped my mind. I have brought dishonor upon my family. And I'm glad you like Mouthbot! I ...

Don't worry too much and just focus on getting better! Thanks for taking to time to read all of this.

I have no idea what I was doing that week... but it is really confusing, and I will have to fix that someday... And also I can't read, because someone ...

You are so right about the wheelchair thing. I can't believe I didn't think about that... ah, that's embarrassing. I'll have to keep that in mind when he shows up ...

Hey thanks for giving this a read! I'll look over the two thought-intrusions again to see what I can do.

Shoot those are pretty awkward. Thanks for the pointers! I'll get around to fixing them once I have a computer and not a little phone keyboard. And thanks for giving ...

Leave it to me to get my math wrong. The singing thing is explained in an earlier chapter and has to do with how the siren language works--they use notes ...

(OMG It's BlueAfrica cue the shrieking) Hey thanks so much for giving this a shot! I have a bad habit of putting my chapter titles in the description part (because ...

Hey, thanks for reviewing! I'm not sure if I'm going to do any tagging for this piece, since it's a part of the LMS contest, but if you can't find ...

Wheelchair boy is pretty great, yeah. I'm glad you like him! Hopefully I can pull him off without being ableist. Fyi, this story is part of an endurance contest know ...