Ventomology

I'm pretty sure that craft-wise, things just go down from here. But you will like the antagonist, I think. I know I enjoy writing him, so hopefully you'll enjoy reading ...

Oh, I'm so glad you think I'm funny. I sometimes feel like my humor is too dry for most people. And yeah, I need to work on the continuity of ...

Now that you mention it, I don't think I ever gave Ellipse a good physical description. I'm very awful about describing my sort-of-narrating characters. Unless they meet each other. Then ...

Ah, you. You need to actually post chapters from yours so I can review them. Tag me or something. Anyways, I'm glad you could actually understand any of this. I ...

I'm just going to leave this little plot on hold for a while, because I'm an evil writer and want to frustrate my readers. Hopefully I don't mess everything up ...

I probably should not write my LMS chapters on Sunday night. You're definitely right about the awkward wording, and I should have caught that. I have plans regarding Andra and ...

Ah, whoops. I forgot to edit this one to match the way I'm now formatting the interludes. Sorry about that.

I think I'm going to try adding some more ships to the mix in the next system. Just because the system the kiddos are in now is empty doesn't mean ...

Since it seems like you're hitting everything at once, I'm going to avoid being the broken record and just thank you again when you're done. Admittedly, I am a bad ...

Oh my gosh you actually came back I love you. Given that this piece is part of the Last Man Standing contest, I'm not really going back to fix nitpicks ...

Whew, clearing the GR? That's quite the task! I applaud your devotion. I'm glad you like the tone of this piece. I was hoping to make the whole thing funnier, ...

Yeah, I've been having some pacing issues with this series. Space travel is time-consuming in this universe, and so much happens during that time, but space is also really empty, ...

Oh my gosh, thank you! I took out all the contractions in Ellipse's dialogue on purpose, yes. She's a total polyglot, and I know my mom uses contractions a bit ...

I would probably leave a campfire too, but at least we probably both use please and thank you. Also thanks for letting me know where you're at with some of ...

Hmm... I should undersell less. Maybe the bad vibes are a byproduct of my late-night editing habits. Thanks for the tips on the science! I'll take that out and see ...