Ventomology

I've been trying to work in a bit of dialogue about how Mouthbot's software actually works, but it could be a while before that actually shows up. But for real, ...

My strict avoidance of contractions in this piece kills me, and it apparently kills everyone else too. I think I get better about the confusing sentences as time goes on, ...

Google Russian cursive. It's hilarious. Also, to titter is to laugh or giggle, but the connotation for me usually implies kind of an overly girlish and obnoxious vibe. Yeah, I ...

This chapter is cute, isn't it? And let me know if you get too far and never see mention of Tejal's birth parents again, because I thought I had mentioned ...

I definitely have a bunch of continuity errors in many of these chapters. Hopefully I've gotten better about that too. Thanks!

I'm pretty sure that craft-wise, things just go down from here. But you will like the antagonist, I think. I know I enjoy writing him, so hopefully you'll enjoy reading ...

Oh, I'm so glad you think I'm funny. I sometimes feel like my humor is too dry for most people. And yeah, I need to work on the continuity of ...

Now that you mention it, I don't think I ever gave Ellipse a good physical description. I'm very awful about describing my sort-of-narrating characters. Unless they meet each other. Then ...

Ah, you. You need to actually post chapters from yours so I can review them. Tag me or something. Anyways, I'm glad you could actually understand any of this. I ...

I'm just going to leave this little plot on hold for a while, because I'm an evil writer and want to frustrate my readers. Hopefully I don't mess everything up ...

I probably should not write my LMS chapters on Sunday night. You're definitely right about the awkward wording, and I should have caught that. I have plans regarding Andra and ...

Ah, whoops. I forgot to edit this one to match the way I'm now formatting the interludes. Sorry about that.

I think I'm going to try adding some more ships to the mix in the next system. Just because the system the kiddos are in now is empty doesn't mean ...

Since it seems like you're hitting everything at once, I'm going to avoid being the broken record and just thank you again when you're done. Admittedly, I am a bad ...

Oh my gosh you actually came back I love you. Given that this piece is part of the Last Man Standing contest, I'm not really going back to fix nitpicks ...