Ventomology

Ah, whoops. I forgot to edit this one to match the way I'm now formatting the interludes. Sorry about that.

I think I'm going to try adding some more ships to the mix in the next system. Just because the system the kiddos are in now is empty doesn't mean ...

Since it seems like you're hitting everything at once, I'm going to avoid being the broken record and just thank you again when you're done. Admittedly, I am a bad ...

Oh my gosh you actually came back I love you. Given that this piece is part of the Last Man Standing contest, I'm not really going back to fix nitpicks ...

Whew, clearing the GR? That's quite the task! I applaud your devotion. I'm glad you like the tone of this piece. I was hoping to make the whole thing funnier, ...

Yeah, I've been having some pacing issues with this series. Space travel is time-consuming in this universe, and so much happens during that time, but space is also really empty, ...

Oh my gosh, thank you! I took out all the contractions in Ellipse's dialogue on purpose, yes. She's a total polyglot, and I know my mom uses contractions a bit ...

I would probably leave a campfire too, but at least we probably both use please and thank you. Also thanks for letting me know where you're at with some of ...

Hmm... I should undersell less. Maybe the bad vibes are a byproduct of my late-night editing habits. Thanks for the tips on the science! I'll take that out and see ...

Ah, yeah, that is a little awkward. Thanks for coming back to read this bit!

Oh, we'll get to the tie-in. You might groan at me, but it will happen. Thanks for reviewing, as always! It's fun to get your reviews because you always catch ...

Hmm... I really didn't expound enough on why they took the other kid along. I'll have to remedy that. Thanks as always! I promise reviews are coming. I just have ...

Thanks!

...Oh, good! I'm glad the mystery around the bounty target is still strong enough. I've been foreshadowing some stuff since the beginning and was worried about being too transparent. Thanks ...

The great thing about aliens is that they might not follow the same gender structures that we do. I don't want to use 'it' as the gender neutral pronoun, since ...