Ventomology

Yes! A novel about a band person! This makes me so happy; you don't even know. Not to mention he's a trombone player! Oh my gosh, I could just gush ...

Hello! Welcome to YWS! So, I'll get right on to business. Grammar-wise, there are a few slip-ups with missing punctuation, awkward quotation marks and an obvious typo in the second ...

Hello there! I know it's late, but welcome to YWS! So, first things first: I think you could get away with making each part longer. Mine usually run between 1000 ...

Um... This is really short... Oh well. I'm back! That first line is so so so cool. I loved it. Anyway, I should have mentioned this earlier, but you aren't ...

Back again! I guess everyone's on a reviewing spree today, huh? That includes me! Anways, down to business. Grammar: Only one major thing, in paragraph 2, you misspelled and capitalized ...

Heya! I'm back! I read through the other parts, and I still think you could get away with making them longer. Maybe split the chapters into 2 parts instead of ...

I'm back, and I see that this is re-write, no? I didn't read the original, so I don't have a basis for comparison, but here we go: One grammar point, ...

Hello! Buggiedude here to review! I didn't read the actual chapters, so please bear with me. The only grammar issues I found are that you slip between verb tenses a ...

What a joy! It's been a while since I read a humorous piece on fairy tales. (Not since a real-life friend wrote some smart-mouthed essay on them) That last line ...

Woo! Hello, and welcome to YWS! I'll start things off with the technical and boring stuff that involves knowing English lit. vocab, and then work my way through to opinions ...

Hello! I'm here to review! Okie dokie, I think that since this is the first time we actually see the titles, you should actually have them written out instead of ...

Ooh! I've been waiting for this! Very nice over all, and no clean-up issues as far as I know. I think just a touch more sensory detail is in order, ...

Piper sounds just as clueless as some of my characters. I love her already! So, I haven't read the other parts of Shadowdale, but the characters and their relationships are ...

I almost feel like this could be a story all by itself, but it's just a prologue! I really want to see where you take this. Anyways, since this is ...

Very interesting... Can I assume that something else will happen that involves a different (but still actually the old guy) person? Um... The line right after mentioning the newspaper is ...