Ventomology

Dear god Hunter... you just had to use the ditto pun. That one is awful. This chapter didn't have anything in particular that I wanted to point out, so no ...

Heya! I have returned for the weekly review. Uh... I'm not really sure what to say as an introduction thing, so I'll just go straight to the notes. Note 1: ...

Yo! Your companion, Buggie, has arrived to review. I'll give a few notes, and then go on to give my impressions of the story and characters so far. Note 1: ...

Hello there! It seems we are all giving impressions, so I will do this as well, before I start berating you about this and that. 1. I love Darren's mom ...

Yo! Your LMS companion is here for a review. Welcome to the party, Miss Flash. Anywho, since I'm sure someone else will address details that really bother them, allow me ...

Yo! Let's start this LMS thing off with a bang, shall we? Anyways, since it seems everyone has already bothered you about nitpicking (I still have some corrections too, if ...

Fort, that ending is so lazy! You totally could have extended this more for TLMS. Go through the grief and sorrow, or maybe Gavin and Fleta bring in someone who's ...

Hello there, Boundless! Welcome to YWS! I hope you like it here, and if you ever have any questions, never be afraid to ask them. :) Anyways, welcoming was only ...

I now see that the key to winning TLMS is to write about pie. I will keep this in mind if I ever join another contest like it. There are ...

You know, seeing this around makes me regret not finishing the novel. I should probably do that this summer... Anyways, in an effort to actually be more active, I shall ...

I feel weird reading this, especially knowing I was the poor victim of this game. Anyways, here I go! I can't tell if you meant for this poem to have ...

Good morning! I'm back to continue reviewing your epic tale of mousey adventures. I would've been here earlier, but I couldn't get online... Sorry! Now the, while the first sentence ...

Hello there! I've (finally) come to continue reviewing. I see we are on the same team as well. :) Um, first, a few specific comments: In the beginning, with all ...

Yo! Let's get this review moving, shall we? First, my nitpicks: he said, “The whole reason If you finish a complete thought which, by itself, would have a period on ...

Hey! Sorry it took so long for me to get here. School has been a hurdle. Anyways, some nitpicks: She should have called out. Not talking with Shayn. I know ...