Ventomology

Heey! Conservation is such a fun topic that I just had to see what you had going on here. Also... I feel like I remember seeing you around when I ...

Hey! Well, wasn't this a chipper piece of poetry? Let's jump right in, shall we? Technical Commentary: 1. So I know the rules of grammar are flexible in poetry, but ...

Hello! I made it back. Like Baezel, I really don't have a lot to complain about! As with the first chapter of the full work, you do a solid job ...

Heey! This was kind of fun. I've always liked mysteries, so I was on this immediately. Technical Commentary: 1. Nice change of speech styles in the different environments! Normally I ...

Hello! I am here to review yet another of your lovely NaPo pieces. Let's cut to the chase, shall we? Technical commentary: 1. One of the big things I learned ...

Heya! First off: I belatedly welcome you to YWS! It's nice to see new members being active, and I hope you like it here! And now we can jump right ...

Hello there! NaPo is so exciting, right? It's good to see folks brave enough to both do it and post their daily pieces. Let's get this review started, shall we? ...

Hey yo! I saw this in the GR, and I was like, instantly intrigued. Superheroes are so fun! Technical Commentary: 1. You might want to do a little bit more ...

Forgive my French: Holy Actual Hecking S-H-I-you-know-the-rest. This is so much happier than the one I remember reading! I'm crying. Ohmigod . Anyways Technical Comments: 1. You have taken musical ...

Aww, that's a cute way to end the section. I love it. Also I have that foreboding feeling that I'm about to like, break down sobbing. Technical Comments: 1. Hmmm... ...

Haha suck it boys. They done goofed. Technical Comments: So uh. This is a thing... which happens... in a lot of literature, usually written by dudes... and I take issue ...

Yo! The beloved Hunter makes his return to the lit section. Welcome back my dude. But uh... onto more pressing matters. Technical Comments: 1. You mention objects in the setting ...

Yo! I'm on a slight break from actual schoolwork this weekend (no drawings, just a concept model heck yea), so here I am to actually catch up on reviews! Technical ...

Hey! I'm back! It only took me like a week. Technical Comments: 1. You probably don't need to label things as "extra chapters" to be honest. The word "extra" sort ...

Hey! I know I promised to pop up around here sooner. Sorry about that. Let's dive right in, shall we? Technical Comments: 1. Just a little nitpicky thing. I don't ...