Ventomology

Hi LSS buddy!!! Let's do this thing, huh? It's always an interesting choice when writers decide to include prologues. I'm personally not a fan of them, but I think you ...

Hey there! This was super cute-- happy endings are so lovely. I've got a number of things you might consider working on, but first: In general, you do a great ...

Heeey! Imagine my surprise when I saw this in the green room. You'd think enough people have seen this that there'd be like a million reviews honestly. Maybe they're just ...

Afterwatch got here real fast huh? I still haven't entirely caught up on old chapters--work is kicking my butt--so I'll keep this one short. I guess my only thing is ...

Sometimes I forget, having never been all that interested in relationships, that they get incredibly tangled. I'm kind of curious to know how you're going to treat all the trading ...

Did Winslow make a pun? Did he? Was that a pun? Please tell me it was a pun. Anyways. An internal affairs plot?! That's so exciting. I'm sure it's been ...

Let's get back into it! I know this is LMS and you have wordcounts to meet (and also that this is only part of a single chapter), but I almost ...

Oh man Winslow gets around, doesn't he. I'm impressed. I took the time to read 10.2 and 10.3, which, as any good mystery should, only raised more questions. I suspect ...

Good grief, Jack. I think this story makes up like half of the Green Room at this point. Since it's summer, maybe I'll come back and read the whole thing ...

Man, Biscuit, I connect so hard with Buck right now wow. It also just... means a lot to me that these characters don't actually label the different ways of feeling ...

OH SNAP. What a deduction, Buck. But oh man, people who assume romance is inherent in dancing are kind of sad to be around. Let loose, Raddig! Have some fun. ...

Hello hello hello! Okay first: HAHAHA HE HAD A TALK WITH AN OPINIONATED ARCHITECT!!!

Hello! Finally made it back. As Jabber already said, it's really wonderful to see Buck fully in his element like this. I don't think we ever really got to see ...

Hello hello! Sorry for the long wait. Maybe this is just me mis-remembering things, but I wonder if Bucket would have known more about the guards already, since he's been ...

Hey there! What a fun delve into iambic pentameter you've got going here. 1. So I know iambic pentameter doesn't have to rhyme (half of Shakespeare's stuff doesn't), but it ...