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  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Literature Re: LMS VI: Let Me Live Tonight 0.1

    Honestly as soon as I read this I was like: well that'd make a good stage monologue. I will freely admit that the only Arthur Miller play I'm familiar with ...

    Sep 11, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Horror Re: The Ten-Year-Old Necromancer: Chapter One

    AHHHHH I'm so in love with this. Anyway, hi, let's do this review thing, eh? Sometimes I have a hard time getting into first person narratives (even Hunger games kind ...

    Sep 11, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: (LMSVI) The Ruptured Shadow: Prologue

    Hi LSS buddy!!! Let's do this thing, huh? It's always an interesting choice when writers decide to include prologues. I'm personally not a fan of them, but I think you ...

    Sep 11, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: The Selkie & the Lighthouse

    Hey there! This was super cute-- happy endings are so lovely. I've got a number of things you might consider working on, but first: In general, you do a great ...

    May 25, 2022
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Friends Breakup Short

    Heeey! Imagine my surprise when I saw this in the green room. You'd think enough people have seen this that there'd be like a million reviews honestly. Maybe they're just ...

    Jul 1, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: How Do You Plead: 11.4

    Afterwatch got here real fast huh? I still haven't entirely caught up on old chapters--work is kicking my butt--so I'll keep this one short. I guess my only thing is ...

    Jun 30, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: How Do You Plead: 11.3

    Sometimes I forget, having never been all that interested in relationships, that they get incredibly tangled. I'm kind of curious to know how you're going to treat all the trading ...

    Jun 28, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Historical Fiction Re: How Do You Plead: 11.2

    Did Winslow make a pun? Did he? Was that a pun? Please tell me it was a pun. Anyways. An internal affairs plot?! That's so exciting. I'm sure it's been ...

    Jun 28, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: How Do You Plead: 11.1

    Let's get back into it! I know this is LMS and you have wordcounts to meet (and also that this is only part of a single chapter), but I almost ...

    Jun 28, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Historical Fiction Re: How Do You Plead: 10.4

    Oh man Winslow gets around, doesn't he. I'm impressed. I took the time to read 10.2 and 10.3, which, as any good mystery should, only raised more questions. I suspect ...

    Jun 28, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Historical Fiction Re: How Do You Plead: 10.1

    Good grief, Jack. I think this story makes up like half of the Green Room at this point. Since it's summer, maybe I'll come back and read the whole thing ...

    Jun 28, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: A Fool's Bucket - Ch. 8.1

    Man, Biscuit, I connect so hard with Buck right now wow. It also just... means a lot to me that these characters don't actually label the different ways of feeling ...

    Mar 31, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: A Fool's Bucket - Ch. 7.4

    OH SNAP. What a deduction, Buck. But oh man, people who assume romance is inherent in dancing are kind of sad to be around. Let loose, Raddig! Have some fun. ...

    Mar 31, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: A Fool's Bucket - Ch. 7.1

    Hello hello hello! Okay first: HAHAHA HE HAD A TALK WITH AN OPINIONATED ARCHITECT!!!

    Mar 31, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: A Fool's Bucket - Ch. 6.3

    Hello! Finally made it back. As Jabber already said, it's really wonderful to see Buck fully in his element like this. I don't think we ever really got to see ...

    Mar 30, 2020


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