Venonymous

thanks! actually I had a writer block, so I closed my eyes and let the words pour down on my paper.

it was helpful, thanks!

it was helpful, thanks!

wth?! This isn't even a review.

Np, its't not your problem you didn't realize it was a poem. And I actually wanted the readers to keep on going and use the line breaks as pauses and ...

Or maybe Neil Hilborn, but thanks for comparing me to a great poet (even though I'm not as great as that)

I think I did have it wrong. I purposely made them separate so they could have the pause breaks but turns out (after you pointed it out) the flow was ...