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Re: Bloody Knuckles
@Vonghese; I really appreciate your review. I don't know very much about fighting, so the things you pointed out to me are extremely helpful, especially since you have experience. Also, ...
Aug 25, 2011 -
Re: Feelings Don't Last Forever
Thank you. I couldn't really get it to stick to any rhyme scheme, so I kinda just spit balled it. Towards the end, my mind was drawing a blank so ...
Feb 3, 2009 -
Re: Amoung the hidden- Margret Pettersen Haddix
I had to read Among The Hidden in the 6th grade for my teacher. I was the fastest reader in the class and she needed someone to get through the ...
Oct 12, 2008 -
Re: A Fairytale Beginning
Ah, sorry. I'm used to the American way of spelling it, my mistake.
Oct 9, 2008 -
Re: Because - Chap. 4
I didn't find any problems, yet again. Another great chapter. I can't wait for the next one to be posted. Mind PMing me when you post it? Thanks. -Venom
Oct 9, 2008 -
Re: Because - Chap. 3 (Edited)
Aw. I truly felt sorry for the main character. Though, I am rather tough so if I was in her position, a fight would probably breakout. Again, I didn't see ...
Oct 9, 2008 -
Re: Because - Chap. 2 (Edited)
Wow. I'm very impressed. Another nearly flawless chapter. There really isn't anything wrong with it, at least, that I can see. Great job. -Venom
Oct 9, 2008 -
Re: When The Cheese Attacked.
Ha. I really enjoyed this. I didn't see anything wrong with it, but then again, I'm not great at critiquing poetry. Your friend couldn't have given you a more creative ...
Oct 8, 2008 -
Re: The Sight and Fell by David Clement Davies
I have read both The Sight and Fell. I absolutely loved both of them. I have also read Fire Bringer, which was equally amazing.
Oct 8, 2008 -
Re: House Of Night Series
I adore these books! I finished Untamed the day I bought it. These are unbelievable books that are addicting, well, at least they are for me. I don't have enough ...
Oct 8, 2008
