VeniVidiVici

I loved this story, I couldn't find any faults in it! I can only find praise. The plot is interesting, the characters grab you, and the tone matches the story. ...

I'm in love with the future of this story. It has so much potential. I'm left with a hanging feeling as I wait for the next installment. First, the Cons- ...

I won't begin to fix the grammatical and spelling errors as I would drive myself insane. So i'll begin with praise. The characterization was thought-out and the base for the ...