Vanz

So Scar, here we are. You, Your writing and me scoring points and reaching to a star. I very much liked chapter 1. Where we meet Tai as a boy ...

Hey there, I read your piece and I liked the read. Nice and unconventional from what I normally read so that's a big plus. Yet there are some things that ...

First of the thing that really stood out to me is your impeccable grammar. Next to that you have a great deal of detail in your work. This really works ...

So hey, saw your short and decided to give reviewing a go. Except from some misspelled things that I can forgive you I'd like to give you some pointers on ...