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Re: Non-believer
Wow! This was great, I loved the concept. Have you ever thought about getting published? The ending was very strong. Keep writing your great! ~Rachael
Sun Apr 13, 2008 8:28 pm -
Re: Icy Paths - Prologue
I agree the second one is the best. It's longer and more interesting. I can't wait to read the rest. Keep writing! ~Rachael
Fri Apr 11, 2008 11:10 pm -
Re: Sitting in a sea full of people
Everyone thank you so much. I'll try fixing it up a bit, adding more metaphors and things.
Fri Apr 11, 2008 10:14 pm -
Re: alone
Well, it's a good start. If you could add life to it I'm sure it would be great. This poem as very good potential.
Thu Apr 10, 2008 4:46 pm -
Re: ..
I liked that a lot. I enjoy poems or books about love. I like that there isn't really a rhythm. The poem still flows well. Great job!
Thu Apr 10, 2008 4:09 pm