Vampiress

Hey. You have good writing skills, but no offense or anything, this sounds almost exactly like twilight. There are so many parallels. The MC is pale skinned and so is ...

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Okay, maybe I made a mistake there but still. Who is Okami? You don't know...... then you really didn't read it.

Purity comes in later in the book, don't worry. :)

Hero here! Now, to review. Note if you cannot handle blood, you shouldn't read this. "read alittle and review what you read, you don't have to do it all at ...

Wow, long. :thud:

Thank you for the review, I apprecaite it. I cannot review yours at the moment, but I will. Welcome-ish to YWS. ;)

Maybe explain why valentines day was the worst for him. Questions: Why did he sleep on the bench?

ok, I change the heal thing!

I'd also like to say Azami, having her fear? If you read the whole thing, it's not a fear but her brother Kage dies, which changes her up.

Hero here! Now, to review. Note if you cannot handle blood, you shouldn't read this. "read alittle and review what you read, you don't have to do it all at ...

hi! i am here to comment on your story, as you may all ready know! first off, i love wolves (my fav animal) so i love them in here lol. ...

Thank you so much. Nice dancing elephant. Yes, i know everyone thinks character talking to the audience was stupid. I don't think so. Thanks alot Mage_banks. Thanks for commenting on ...

Ok, thank you.

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