VampireSenshi

Define awkward...

Well, Aurus was smirking because he thouggt it was funny he didn't know. He was sad when he finally figured out, and he felt the pain. Abd he fiballu understood ...

Thank You guys so much, I noticed the spelling errors right after i posted it and kind of kicked myself. But nobody's perfect i suppose. I know how you feel ...

Dude!!! This is amazing! I haven't read the other parts, but its totally sparking my interest. Publish this, i would buy it. Setiously, keep writing!!! 11/10

that was a fun little tidbit, and i can't wait for the next part of the story to progress. Are there other parts that you posted? Anyway, i hope that ...

Thanks so much for the tips. I find that i have the same problems in my writing allways. I liked that you understood the point of whether or not blinking ...

Well, thankyou so mush for the tips. But the vary was supposed to be misspelled, is if he was using an accent. And i also didn't like this very mych ...

I can practically feel the emotion flowing out of you threw your poetry... Though it's a little dark for my liking, still a great poem. Keep Writing!!! Sincerely, Lesley

I have realized the different spelling errors, and i appreciate the helpfuls tips. @Lion, as for your question about the sunglasses and whether he's able to teleport with a device ...

Thanks lots!!! I'm just trying to develop the plot now...

Interesting take on this song...

I've never liked the Rapunzel fairy-tale, but this made it more enjoyable... You're a fantastic writer!!!