Vamp_Dollie

Wow I just realized how terrible this is, Sorry for posting it.

Um, excuse me but it's not through the topic of an emo. It's actually through the perspective of someone who has histrionic personality disorder (the attention seeking disorder). I appreciate ...

It was meant to be short, and acoustic. I wanted each line to be sung indvidually, a lot of great songs clock in under two minutes though.

I think it's very nice. I just don't see a lot of personality behind it, I don't see a lot of emotion. Anyone could have written this. Maybe you should ...

It seems heartfelt, I like that. I can tell it's about someone real or a real experience.

I think you should expand it. It seems like you're trying and I hate reading things like that. The words should flow naturally as if thier coming straight from your ...

I like the morbidity. It's not overly done so it's good. I liked the bit of internal struggle in the verses, you should expand on it.

It seems very passionate, I like it.