Published January 30, 2009
As much as we may try
we cannot conceal
all the confusion we feel
from the polished honesty
defining the line
between vain fantasy
and shocking reality
May your eyes burn with shame
and your heart sink heavy with pain
scream out narcissus' name
Vanity vanity shatter this reflection
vanity vanity you laid your curse on me.
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It was meant to be short, and acoustic. I wanted each line to be sung indvidually, a lot of great songs clock in under two minutes though.
um no offence, but i don't really think this would make a good song. unless it has a lot of instrumental parts, the whole thing would probably take up to a min and a half. either try adding more to it or put it as a poem.
hope this doesn't sound rude-
bren