Valkyrie17

Thank you so much for the review! An extra thank you for the criticism! I do feel it its a bit odd (the longer lines) but I am struggling with ...

That makes this even more awesome! :D

Thank you for the review! Your feedback is really helpful. I appreciate the little nitpicks, I know there will always be a few mistakes I'll miss. Thanks for the suggestions, ...

Thanks! I'm so happy to hear you enjoyed it. :D Yeah that would have made a better tittle now that you mention it. It was late when I posted this ...

Thank you! I am glad I gave someone goosebumps. :D Yes, she was hypnotised and she becomes rude to her friends because of the eyes. I see what you mean ...

Thank you so much! I am so glad to hear that you have enjoyed it. Its great to know that someone else understood what was going on completely. I was ...

Hey! Thanks for the welcome and review Hanorah! Yeah, like I mentioned below I didn't know this would be good enough as a stand alone to belong in the poetry ...

Honestly, it wasn't a mistake I just didn't see this as poetry as I have never written any before therefore I didn't really know this was suited for that section. ...

Thank you! I have changed it to the poetry section now. I've never set out to write poetry it just kinda ended up like that. Originally, I did follow on ...

Hey this is a great update to your story. I am already hooked and can't wait to read what happens to Boe in the next round. There are a few ...