Valentine

Hey thanks octoberskye, it was really emotional to write. I didn't plan it, it just all came out. I'm glad you liked it.

Thanks so much you two for the awesome reviews! I tried to correct everything you said and have updated the version above. Thanks alot!

Thanks vkshravi for the feedback! I'm so glad you liked it and it and I'm giddy with your such high praise. With the paragraph spacing- everything was split into paragraphs ...

Haha, I totally agree. Being rebellious has a way of making things more fun! Hey, I am so glad you enjoyed this! I'll make sure to correct those things and ...

to Issac: Yea man, you are totally right with your comment. There is always light and dark in your mind. Often more dark, that's why it's so hard to do ...

Hey thank! I am glad you like it!

Thanks! I got worried when somebody voted that the style wasn't interesting.

To a girl who has "A Fallen Angel" below her name. I imagine this story will be perfect for you, haha. I am glad you liked it.

I'm sorry you didn't like this as much as the first one. The mind of an angel can be confusing.

Sorry about the fragments, but that's just how I write. I am going to finish the entry, I was just hurried and decided to post it when it wasn't completely ...

Thanks Wayward bird, I the rhyming is a little unique. It was intended however.

Haha, thanks guys. i am musical actually, which is probably why it feels like a song, cause my poems are songs!

thanks, I'll keep the meter in mind.

Okay, I edited and added some things, tell me what you think.

hey thanks guys, I will edit it some and post some more.