VaiVedrai

Hello! I liked what you were getting at with this poem. I felt that you were trying to express this strong pull we all feel towards someone at one point ...

I liked that the first lines were short. Like others said, they weren't really grabbing, but I still wanted to keep reading. I too am totally confused about the "attention ...

It's my first time reviewing (is that the correct term?) another's poem on here, so bear with me... I really liked that it was short and broken into the different ...