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Re: The Lost System -Chapter two- Diplomacy
I'm really liking this story so far. Reading through I have noticed a few grammar mistakes here and there. For example; "Hello, Prince Fintan.” The General said he, like the ...
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Re: Star Knight's Cross Chapter 2: Outcast
I quite enjoy Tiar as a character and can't wait to see how he develops. Your dialogue is snappy and I'm interested to see where this story goes. My only ...
Jul 24, 2022 -
Re: The Fallen King: Chapter Nine, pt 3
This is an excellent series. I'm enjoying your writing style, but I feel like I should point out that bare back is two words, not one. The one word implies ...
Jul 24, 2022