Utopia

Thanks sis! I tried to give hidden glimpses at Wendy character. For instance, when she is flying, I say she plunges down which is dangerous and scary, but Wendy is ...

Thanks for the review!

Thanks for you review! I'm not the best at grammar so your nitpicks really help. I'll tell you when the next chapter comes out which is pretty soon... (I really ...

Thanks for the review big sis. You're full of great ideas! I know I need to focus more on things making sense but I really can see this story coming ...

Thanks for the review! I definitely understand what you're talking about. I do need to stop making all my stories accounts and start making them more happening. I did have ...

Thanks. That was what I was aiming for, glad it was a success.

Thanks for the review, Iggy. I didn't realized I put so many full stops in that sentence. By the way, I love your avatar.

Thanks for the review! I did a thorough search for mistakes and have changed most of them. Thanks for the advice and I have changed the plot so that everyone ...

I know it's a little late, but thank you for the review. I have added more detail to the chapter that I hope will help. The reason Eyeline is in ...

I know it's a little late, but thank you for the review. I have added more detail to the chapter that I hope will help. The reason Eyeline is in ...

I know it's a little late, but thank you for the review. I have added more detail to the chapter that I hope will help. The reason Eyeline is in ...

Thank you for the very helpful review. It is hard sometimes to keep the tone of a poem going through the whole thing, but I will try. I'll edit the ...

Thanks for the review. I never realized those mistakes and will change them as soon as possible. I agree with the italics and will try to change them too.

Thank you for the review! I can see now how it can be a little hard to grip. The person I labeled as 'he' is the drunk person and he ...

I know it's a little late, but thank you for your review. I'm changing the mistakes and checking my grammar. The ending was a mistake, it was supposed to end ...