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UriahElroy

UriahElroy

  • Poetry » Humor, Satire Re: A Pathetic Piece of Writing

    Bravo, every internet user ever, bravo! I agree and understand your point! Want me to kiss your poetic ass with more suction? Pucker up, not your brown eye but my ...

    Jul 8, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: Helium

    Being an Aquarius (an "air sign"), I'm especially grateful to have stumbled upon this epic. Certain passages captured the essence of my existence, such as; "People have worked harder than ...

    Jul 8, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Other Re: Friend

    Greetings! I'll try not to harp on the content of your poem, as you are already aware of its implications from previous reviewers; "cliche'," emotionally tempestuous and perhaps a little ...

    Jul 8, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Humanity's Ignorance

    In terms of poetry and abiding to grammatical authority, it is very well written. My first reading revealed no mistakes or notable misconceptions. The conveyed imagery was impressive, but the ...

    Jul 8, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Romantic Re: "Goodbye"

    It is suspenseful and leaves me wanting more, however I must give back some constructive criticism; "Sometimes it's not what you say, but how you say it." Admittedly, I would ...

    Jul 8, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, Satire Re: Fofofoforced Joke Haiku

    I can't leave reviews, To this site, I'm fresh and new, Nobody likes me. Whether yours is a piece of parodic prose on the nature of a haiku, an expression ...

    Jul 8, 2015


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