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Re: A Pathetic Piece of Writing
Bravo, every internet user ever, bravo! I agree and understand your point! Want me to kiss your poetic ass with more suction? Pucker up, not your brown eye but my ...
Jul 8, 2015 -
Re: Helium
Being an Aquarius (an "air sign"), I'm especially grateful to have stumbled upon this epic. Certain passages captured the essence of my existence, such as; "People have worked harder than ...
Jul 8, 2015 -
Re: Friend
Greetings! I'll try not to harp on the content of your poem, as you are already aware of its implications from previous reviewers; "cliche'," emotionally tempestuous and perhaps a little ...
Jul 8, 2015 -
Re: Humanity's Ignorance
In terms of poetry and abiding to grammatical authority, it is very well written. My first reading revealed no mistakes or notable misconceptions. The conveyed imagery was impressive, but the ...
Jul 8, 2015 -
Re: "Goodbye"
It is suspenseful and leaves me wanting more, however I must give back some constructive criticism; "Sometimes it's not what you say, but how you say it." Admittedly, I would ...
Jul 8, 2015 -
Re: Fofofoforced Joke Haiku
I can't leave reviews, To this site, I'm fresh and new, Nobody likes me. Whether yours is a piece of parodic prose on the nature of a haiku, an expression ...
Jul 8, 2015
