UrbanNomad

@GeeLyria Yo thanks for the feedback. The username is much more disproportionately cooler than myself, but yeah thankyou. Don't worry about being harsh, I literally wrote this poem today whilst ...

Wow I love your style of drawing!

Despite what has been said, you don't need to capitalise the start of every line-in fact most contemporary poets stay away from this. Similarly, the punctuation is fine and the ...

Those are true words. Read some of my other poems if you want to see thought provoking poetry

By the way, any feedback (including harsh criticism) would be greatly appreciated. I want to learn as much as I can because poetry is a major interest of mine. As ...