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  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Dakota's Diary, Chapter *New Edits 5/11/10*

    I have to agree with Moriah Leila. It's very moving and the imagery was spectacular. The descriptions were right on cue, and I could picture the scenes very well. I ...

    Jan 9, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Jessica and Mimi

    This was something I haven’t come across. I loved the idea behind the story. I though it was presented in a very unique voice, but there was something that I ...

    Jan 8, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Ignore this

    Actually, I was able to get a good idea of the story even without the first paragraph. You did a wonderful job with the idea and emotion behind the piece; ...

    Jan 7, 2010
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Map Making and Writing

    Actually, I found this to be quite enjoyable to read. The idea was clean and composition was excellent. In that, the reader could sense the passion you have for writing, ...

    Jan 7, 2010


akdsjfh you know that feeling where you start writing a scene but then you get bored with the scene so you move on and start writing a different scene and then you get bored with that scene so you move on to an entirely different WIP and then you get bored with that so you move on-
— AceassinOfTheMoon