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Re: Dakota's Diary, Chapter *New Edits 5/11/10*
I have to agree with Moriah Leila. It's very moving and the imagery was spectacular. The descriptions were right on cue, and I could picture the scenes very well. I ...
Jan 9, 2010 -
Re: Jessica and Mimi
This was something I haven’t come across. I loved the idea behind the story. I though it was presented in a very unique voice, but there was something that I ...
Jan 8, 2010 -
Re: Ignore this
Actually, I was able to get a good idea of the story even without the first paragraph. You did a wonderful job with the idea and emotion behind the piece; ...
Jan 7, 2010 -
Re: Map Making and Writing
Actually, I found this to be quite enjoyable to read. The idea was clean and composition was excellent. In that, the reader could sense the passion you have for writing, ...
Jan 7, 2010
