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Thanks! And yeah, I get what you're saying with the needle and thread, it just flowed through when I wrote it like that. Thanks for the compliments and constructive criticism! ...

Thanks so much! I didn't intend to rhyme in this poem, but in some stanzas I just had to. And at the end. :D Thanks for the spelling correction, I'll ...

"Hello Mr. and Mrs. Sherryboton," the plump old lady behind the desk smiled at the young London couple. They looked like like good people, maybe she'd sell -- no, deliver ...

Thanks for the reviews. I didn't know if it would be that good, but that's all encouraging. Thanks for the grammar and spelling corrections, I'm going to go fix them ...