Unsquishable

Hi angels~ I think this idea is really interesting! The lake part reminds me of the part in The Magician's Nephew (C.S. Lewis) where the main character found himself in ...

Hi amatuli~ I'm Unsquishable~ There are a few questions I'd like to ask as well as a few suggestions I'd like to give, if that's okay with you. The old ...

Hi Silversun! First of all, I have a few questions that I'd like to ask pertaining this chapter. It would be a safe house in the midst of enemies, but ...

Sare, here is the review!! This'll just be short since Kara already got most of the problems~ Rising, she grabbed her note book and trotted upstairs. Suddenly, inspiration struck. Setting ...

Hi Selene~ This seems like an interesting story. I'd love to read more of it. So anyway, here are some of the errors I found: I jumped, but he seemed ...

Hi! Here's the review! Today had to be the best day of my life -EVER! This doesn't sound like something a working man would say. Maybe you should rephrase it. ...

Hi angels symphony! Firstly, I just want to say that this piece is nicely written. I felt that your characters weren't flat at all... the chapter didn't reveal too much ...

Hi Mira! Here's the review I promised you! Tears ran down my cheeks. I sobbed furiously, trying to wipe away the liquid running down my face. My best friend, Teresa, ...

Hi! Firstly, I would have to say that I think this chapter is full of could-be useless information. I think you should concentrate more on the important things. As she ...

Hello Fort! I'll just skip immediately to what I think about your piece since Moo has written most of the errors I found in your work. I like this piece, ...

Hallo Moo! Here's the feedback on your prologue: Avynn seemed even more alive in its last hours. The storm pulsed around the lone figure hunched over the balcony, lightning illuminating ...