Unrecompensed

Our opinions on an interesting character different greatly, it seems. And, of course, the quality of writing has a lot to do with things, Phorcys.

Lack of conflict because there's no sword fight or real argument? Lack of conflict because there's no two people having an overly obvious conflict? There doesn't need to be conflict ...

Snoink, I was simplying for the sake of a critique. I'd have expected you to see that, but I'll make it more obvious next time. There's no need in bogging ...

I thought the story was great, and the fact it was true added a lot (like it needed to be said). I didn't think it was too well written, but ...

I think before anyone comments, you should revise this yourself. There are several errors in the first paragraph alone. I critique, not babysit. - Andy