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Re: The Pact, Prologue
You're welcome!
Jun 8, 2014 -
Re: Magic Trick For Frank.
Oh!
Jun 8, 2014 -
Re: Magic Trick For Frank.
Oh. Sorry!
Jun 8, 2014 -
Re: Are you finding everything okay?
This is beautiful Mags! I love it! This is such an amazing poem, and the imagery in here is almost better then mine is in my novel! The description was ...
Jun 8, 2014 -
Re: Infinite Oblivion: Chapter 1
i am thinking that you read or watched TFIOS because that was in there, and I bawled my eyes out so hard, and I don't think I have ever cried ...
Jun 7, 2014 -
Re: Infinite Oblivion: Chapter 1
Thank you!
Jun 6, 2014 -
Re: the runaway
Aww shucks. It was nothing!
Jun 6, 2014 -
Re: Infinite Oblivion: Chapter 1
Thank you for the review! Yes the poison is very strong, so he dies pretty much as it goes down his throat. It is in the future so they can ...
Jun 6, 2014 -
Re: Infinite Oblivion: Chapter 1
Thank you for the review. I wasn't offended, don't worry. I do agree about the cloak though, I will change that, but I needed something to hide her hair, face, ...
Jun 5, 2014 -
Re: The End of All
Thank you for the review! It was a lot of help!
Jun 4, 2014 -
Re: the runaway
This is beautiful! I don't do poetry so I can't help you with anything to poetry like. But I loved the last line. It was beautifully well written! The poem ...
Jun 4, 2014 -
Re: The End of All
I will definitely have to change the "guys" thing. It's ok, the review helps, so I am not offended by it. And anyways, why would I be offended? I really ...
Jun 4, 2014 -
Re: The End of All
I was kind of going for the feeling of being clueless as to who the narrator is. I might try to work on the "Not terrifying" part though, ;D. I ...
Jun 4, 2014 -
Re: But I Still Love You
All of you are right. I am very sorry to all...
Jun 4, 2014 -
Re: Confines III
I have not read anymore of the novel, but what I have read I was delighted with!
Jun 4, 2014