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  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Teen Fiction Re: The Mob Boss

    All i can say is that mob boss or boss was kind of repetitive. I think this was a wonderfully well written story and is there going to be a ...

    Sat Sep 28, 2013 6:15 pm
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: Loss and Gain pt. 1

    OKAY, so i started a story similar to this one, so I am hoping to post that one instead. I just couldn't move forward with this plot, so i had ...

    Sat Sep 28, 2013 6:10 pm
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: Loss and Gain pt. 1

    Sorry about the sobbing thing. Yah, now that I read it again, that is the most stupid mistake EVER!!!! argh.

    Sat Jun 22, 2013 2:45 am
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: Loss and Gain pt. 1

    I was thinking of adding more detail in part 2. The accident and the voice are kinda like cliff hangers i guess you could say. Um and yah . . ...

    Sat Jun 22, 2013 2:44 am


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