UnicornBookWorm

Hi MaskedDreams :) I like your idea and I'd like to know what would happen next. As for the constructive criticism: You need to be more descriptive so you can ...

I like this story. I really like the beginning. I like how the introduction was written. It's short and sweet but I think you could have lengthened it a little ...

This is really a good story. I like your writing style; it's very detailed. I could see the characters in my head while I was reading. I like the plot ...