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Thanks, iheartbooks, and XChangeX, i really like this story, even though this first chapter was kind of boring, but my second is wayyyyyy better! Check it out, and thanks for ...

You MUST KEEP WRITING! I found this piece absolutely MARVELOUS! It's really great;awesome concept, awesome powers, awesome characters... awesome author... Its brilliant! Please keep writing!

Okay, I, am in LOVE WITH YOUR STORY!!! You HAVE to keep writing! Its... Its... Its amazing!!! I didn't see any errors... probably because I was too deeply involved in ...

A brilliant twist on a classic fairytale, I thoroughly enjoyed this piece. I hope you keep writing, because you have a LOT of potential! Loved it!

I am totally entranced in your novel. It is great, and very exciting. I have noticed that you weren't cutting your sentences so short like you were in chapter one ...

I loved this story! I usually don't read short stories, but now I want to read more after reading this amazing piece! I was instantly lost in the story... loved ...

A book would ultimately suck without any descriptions whatsoever, so a blind girl may not see these things but it does not mean the readers can't. But thanks for liking ...

Oh my gosh that is amazing!!!!!!!!!!!! Great job, wow... you have to keep writing!A few critiques is to stop using the whole "thingy" words and stuff like that. But, you ...

I thought it was pretty good except for a few errors that were already covered by other editors. Anyways, I can't wait to hear more!! :wink:

Yeah, this is Chapter One... I should probably write that as my title... hahaha! Anyways, glad you like it! :smt005

Very interesting. Sort of a mass murderer that is suicidal in and amongst himself... I'm interested to see where you go with this, if you plan to go anywhere with ...

Pretty awesome story. I am enthralled with every thing! :thud: Awesome Possum -An awesome fan