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Re: Untitled for now
This has a great foundation, vivid visuals, and great word choice. Maybe you could work on having longer paragraphd, but that's just me. I love it (:
Nov 3, 2012 -
Re: The Little Girl
I simply adore this! Showing the passing time is just so...original! I've never seen a poem like this, and I love it (:
Nov 3, 2012 -
Re: Perfection
Thanks (: !
Nov 3, 2012 -
Re: Perfection
Thank you (:
Nov 3, 2012
