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Re: Butterfly! Part one...
Hey Kat and Ella! Now, I think I've said this before, but you should have an older person with more experience come in on a Pirate Pad and help you ...
Feb 22, 2014 -
Re: In This Time Of Eliminating Prologue/chapter 1-3
Wonderful writing! Kathryn here to review! It seems to me you have spent many hours editing this, and that you have taken direction well! For being 12, this is outstanding! ...
Dec 19, 2013 -
Re: Happy Kid Land: Conclusion
This is awesome! Kathryn here to review your work! I think the character development is very good, and kept me on the edge of my seat! I think that this ...
Dec 19, 2013 -
Re: Deja Vu
This leaves me hanging, In a good way :D Hey! Kathryn here to review your lovely writing! First of all, the plot was good, and I'm glad to see the ...
Dec 19, 2013 -
Re: People and Paper
This writing is so fresh! Hi, Kathryn here to review! I think your formatting is a little off though, you should separate every phrase that has a comma on it, ...
Dec 19, 2013 -
Re: Description
Your imagery is amazing! Hi, my name is Kathryn, and I'll be reviewing your poetry! I think the descriptions are pretty cool, and different! I'm tired of seeing cliche remarks! ...
Dec 19, 2013