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Re: Hidden - Chapter One
I like how descriptive it is. Lily is a good character, albeit she seems a little depressing to be around. One thing i suggest is to spend a bit more ...
Oct 14, 2011 -
Re: What Lies Within
Very descriptive. I like where it's heading and the characters are interesting.
Oct 14, 2011 -
Re: Chapter 1
lol I know it's a little late, but thank you.
Oct 13, 2011 -
Re: Mostly Human Chapter 1
it's good, but i was a little confused about who was speaking and what the setting was. i myself am more of a werewolf person, but i know a good ...
Oct 13, 2011 -
Re: Apocalpse:What now? Prologue
it's good. One of my favorite genres of book and video games are futuristic post apocalypse types
Oct 13, 2011
