UFO

Appreciate it, as always :) Your reviews are a great help in pointing out the crap that I do without thinking lol. I created some good dialogue and interaction in ...

Thanks for a most excellent review :) The story itself is written in third person, so the Narrator is me. I know, it may be hard to tell since the ...

Not at all. As my girlfriend likes to quote: The most beautiful things are those that madness prompts and reason writes. I've had weirder ideas during even weirder circumstances.

Well no, the dream sequence in the beginning is just a portion of the full thing anyway - The actual 4 or 5 "minutes" on the beach before he's removed ...

I know that in real life, I have a horrible time of telling stories out loud because I have a tendency to over-do it on the back story before getting ...

I appreciate the review. I'm not very worried about things like grammatical mistakes or spelling, but overall flow of the story, dialogue, and the presentation of my characters. I'm having ...