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  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: Broken

    Thanks! This really motivates me. I can't say it enough, thanks for the help and support

    Sep 12, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: Broken

    The two people, believe it or not, have absolutely no relevence to the story. "Daniel" is the typical troubled teen. And "Dylan" is just a friend struggling to help. The ...

    Sep 10, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: Broken

    I really appreciate the review! The Humpty Dumpty part was just a typo I didn't notice. But the rest genuinely helps. Thanks a lot for taking the time to review!

    Sep 10, 2013
  • Short Story » General, General Re: This Aunt I had

    I absolutely love your writing style. Seriously, wow. Tiny gramatical errors, but nothing huge. I'm thoroughly impressed. Just, wow. The best thing I could say is to proof-read and edit. ...

    Sep 9, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Spiritual Re: story thang (I need a title help) (Part 1)

    Woah. I'm extremely impressed. It's detailed, lengthy, and gave me chills. I love your character development. I really love this. Woah. Maybe, though, you should split this up into pieces? ...

    Sep 9, 2013


These were autumn mornings, the time of year when kings of old went forth to conquest; and I, never stirring from my little corner in Calcutta, would let my mind wander over the whole world.
— Rabindranath Tagore, The Cabuliwallah