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Re: Broken
Thanks! This really motivates me. I can't say it enough, thanks for the help and support
Sep 12, 2013 -
Re: Broken
The two people, believe it or not, have absolutely no relevence to the story. "Daniel" is the typical troubled teen. And "Dylan" is just a friend struggling to help. The ...
Sep 10, 2013 -
Re: Broken
I really appreciate the review! The Humpty Dumpty part was just a typo I didn't notice. But the rest genuinely helps. Thanks a lot for taking the time to review!
Sep 10, 2013 -
Re: This Aunt I had
I absolutely love your writing style. Seriously, wow. Tiny gramatical errors, but nothing huge. I'm thoroughly impressed. Just, wow. The best thing I could say is to proof-read and edit. ...
Sep 9, 2013 -
Re: story thang (I need a title help) (Part 1)
Woah. I'm extremely impressed. It's detailed, lengthy, and gave me chills. I love your character development. I really love this. Woah. Maybe, though, you should split this up into pieces? ...
Sep 9, 2013
