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TwoHeadedDuck

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Dramatic Re: The Withered Sky- Prologue.

    I like what you have so far. It's a great introduction to your story, leaving plenty unsaid to continue on. It does however give a few pieces of information, which ...

    Oct 8, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Neverland's Child

    Beautiful! I love how you portrayed the characters, they work really well. A few of the sentences don't flow as well as the others, and I find the beginning few ...

    Oct 8, 2015


I only know that learning to believe in the power of my own words has been the most freeing experience of my life. It has brought me the most light. And isn't that what a poem is? A lantern glowing in the dark.
— Elizabeth Acevedo, The Poet X