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Hai! I see from your joining date that, technically, you're not really new, but I haven't seen you around and I don't often get to say this so, "Welcome to ...

Hi Happy! Welcome to YWS! You may not have read the Rules yet, but one of them is that you review at least two works before posting any of your ...

Hai! From Jennya’s comment, I’m assuming this is a previous character that you’ve worked with before? Storybook? It doesn’t really matter much, as I got a pretty good sense of ...

Hai! Your premise looks very cool and it's neat how it's in Germany. Stuffs never in Germany, unless it's about the Nazis. Anyway, I quite like Gertrude. She's not one ...

Hai! I’m sorry, I know this sounds mean, but I didn’t really like this. I didn’t like your main character. She was too Mary Sue-ish. And what was the point ...

Hai! Well, Chapter 2 lives up to the hype. ;) Again, I like the humour, though it wasn't roaring-laugh-out-loud-oh-my-gawsh-I-think-done-busted-a-rib kind of humour. More the kind that keeps you grinn

Hai! Oh, by the way my name is Jade. Well, it’s actually Augusta but come on, who in their right mind names their kid Augusta? The whole reason behind it ...

Hai! :D Mr. Renard was my guardian, my Godfather, and although he wasn’t the kindest or gentlest, he gave me everything I ever needed... Yet even during these lessons, the ...

Hi! I liked this, it was very ROFL inducing. :mrgreen: I like your character's snark and the humour it evoked. Especially the bit about the DS; you were building up ...

Hai! The best thing about this was the title. That was what drew me in. It's like in the Tim Burton Batman film, you know, "Have you ever danced with ...

Hai! This was quite heavy; emotionally, I mean. Is it based on fact, or pure fiction? Either way, it was good. It flowed nicely, even though it was so short. ...

Hai! :mrgreen: Um. It's a pity it was too late for the contest, I'm sure you would have done brilliantly. I didn't spot the horse dying/reappearing thing and I don't ...

Hai! :mrgreen: Trapped in an endless abyss, Shylen recalls the choices she made and the path she took. She can't regret her decisions, she can only accept that they were ...

Hey! I like your title, cos it reminds me of that film with the giant ants in, but maybe that's not the vibe you were going for, lol... You write ...

Hey Rosey! I really, really liked this; your style was very good and it flowed extremely well. I really liked the conflicted relationship between the girl and the knight, and ...