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  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Fog - Part 8/10

    No one knew what to say, the truckers found themselves back on a seat and Joe stood close to the door holding the shotgun like a sentry or a prison ...

    Sep 16, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Fog - Part 7/10

    “There, someone’s out there!” T he boy of the couple said and we all followed his finger. Should be a small letter on “the” and “the boy of the couple” ...

    Sep 16, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Fog - Part 6/10

    Hello! I had to hold Janey. We had two bodies... These two facts sound oddly connected. There was a way about how he eyed her, how his hand’s moved along ...

    Sep 16, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Fog - Part 5/10

    Hello again! I looked back into the cubicle at his face. He was dead, not dying. The blood had seeped most of the way from his wrists to the door. ...

    Sep 16, 2011
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: Hadrian's Wall: Legio VI Ferrata

    Hi! Just letting you know that I upped the rating on this to an 18+ as you had a lot of strong swearing here. It's always best to rate too ...

    Sep 16, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Fog - Part 4/10

    yo! “They’re birds . ” T he boy with the leather jacket said. “I can see them when they hit, they look like magpies, but magpies don’t flock, I don’t ...

    Sep 14, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Fog - Part 3/10

    He offered me big money, I would have taken it, if Tara wasn’t ready-to-pop pregnant . This is a very crude image, and from what I’ve seen of Ross, it ...

    Sep 14, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Fog - Part 2/10

    Yello! “I tell you one winter morning it didn’t get light until lunch time, and ‘dem Eskimos, sometimes they don’t see light for months . ” T he biggest one ...

    Sep 14, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Fog - Part 1/10

    Hey Joshua! This is definitely the best thing of yours I read so far--it flows a lot easier than Thirty-One Days. ^_^ It did have a few wrinkles, but you've ...

    Sep 14, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, General Re: Softness of Doves

    Hi Amelia! Side note before I begin: you accidentally posted this chapter twice, so I deleted the unliked chapter for you. ^_^ A filthy shovel was slung at my feet. ...

    Sep 14, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Lolzombies Prologue

    Hello! The bane of all grammar, the text. I'm not sure that this makes sense, like the two ends tying together. I'm not sure that texts are the bane of ...

    Sep 13, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Dead End

    Hey Ranger! I love zombies. ^_^ XD A tooth just fell out of my mouth. I didn’t feel it, just saw it on the ground, found a gap in my ...

    Sep 6, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Chapter 1 - The Road Less Travelled

    Hello! As soon as I had finished reading English at Cambridge, I knew I wanted to do something different. On a first reading I didn’t really like this as an ...

    Sep 6, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Torture Scene

    Hello! The back of his skull throbbed like a whore's heart Not sure why a whore’s heart? Traditionally the consensus seems to be that whores don’t have hearts. A steady ...

    Sep 5, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: The Eolaithe

    Hello! The Eolaithe (EE - OH - LAY - TH) is a Science Fantasy novel. Set In the future after the War Of Peace that sent the world back to ...

    Sep 3, 2011


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