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Ok, as your Secret Santa, I wanted to do something special. So I read the previous chapters and I'm going to review this one (also because I stink at poetry). ...

Hi, guess who? Your Secret Santa here to review!! =D I loved this from the start. First of all, the worlds that you create always seem to intrigue me. And ...

Hi again, I don't think you remember me. Anyway, I just read this excellent piece of writing and I have to say that you are very good with the action ...

I really liked, no, I loved the paras that were in italic, where the mother was reading the story. It intrigues me so much to know about this world that ...

hi, I'm here to review. This is really good. It takes the reader into another world and also into the minds of the mermaids and the little boy. Your started ...

Hi, here to review. I really like how you started off with that tone of mystery. You kept up with the tone until the very end, slowly revealing bits of ...

Hi, Twinkle here to review. Firstly I gotta say, that was a long read. It took me a while to get to the end but it was all worth it. ...

Woah, that was fast. One second ago, I was reading about a nine year old Ryan and now he's a lot older and what's surprising is that he's been able ...

Very nice, I don't have much to say here. Although I'm still confused about Indigo but a lot of things are clearer now. It was a short, sweet, relaxing episode ...

I'm sorry it took so long. I've been caught up with things. And anyway, onto the review. I really liked the suspense that's been built in this chapter, it was ...