Twinkle4ever

I think it's a really interesting poem. I like the way you've written every para completely different from the previous one. And the last para really gives it a good ...

I loved it. There is a lot of suspense as far as I can tell and it makes me want to read more. It shows the work of a creative ...

I like the Title. It suits a good, thrilling, adventurous story like this one. Stories which leave the readers in suspense and curiosity are the most liked ones. It is ...

The beginning is eye-catching indeed. It urges the readers to read more. A fantasy-based story, along with action and suspense. It's something everybody likes. The description is not too much ...